Audience Feedback Throughout

Due to my short time period my feedback  throughout is limited however from what I did receive I've learned that my approach to the my ancillary products is becoming effective as this person is in the target audience she is aged 18 and feels like my promotion has been done effectively. This person 

This is feedback from someone else in the same age group she is 19 and she thinks that my works well against eachother and there is clear synergy which is positive however my blue tint needs to be more present and across both.

I found both feedback effective and it helped my push my work in the right direction.