Tuesday 18 November 2014

Update on editing and feedback:

 
Editing and A Little bit of Our Feedback !
 
 
 
 
 
 
Feedback:
 
Elaborating on our feedback we gave in the video . One of our supportive media teachers watched some of what we have already collectively edited . After watching it a few times , our teacher gave us some feedback of our strengths and weakness of what we already have.
 
Strengths :
 
Great shots where you can clearly see the artist .
Location such as SouthBank relate to artists own reference to London in the song .
Great acting from the artist who seems to be enjoying herself in the music video .
 
Weaknesses :
 
One shot from the our location of Alexandra Palace Park framing is slightly out of the rule of thirds . Our teacher said it was alright , however , to get a better grade we was advanced to film this base track again to make it more accurate and visually entertaining for the audience .
 
Another is the idea could improve our music video that in our greenery location , we need some more movement , to make it more visually entertaining for our target audience .

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