Rough Cut Feedback

After watching a bit of our First Rough Cut , our teachers gave us some feedback on what our strengths on what they saw and also improvements we could make :

Strengths :

• Editing to the beat was good
• Shots used were good
• Artist character was excellent , could tell that she was confident , which gave the music video a more vibrant and fun atmosphere

Weaknesses :

• Our first location of Alexandra Palace (Green area) was good however , slightly contrasted to the rest of our music video locations which were more modernised and urban which suit our artist .
• Also , add more movement within our music video to keep the audience interested .
• The visual structure of the music video is good but it needs more thinking to show the audience and let them know when each part of the song is coming such as the Bridge and Hook.